Mentor Sentence – Descriptive writing

Today we read the book, “Owl Moon” by Jane Yolen.

This sentence was chosen from the book to examine:

Our Feet crunched over the crisp snow and little gray footprints followed.

Students:  You are invited to “imitate” this sentence.  Respond to this post with your own descriptive sentence that is similar to this one.

15 thoughts on “Mentor Sentence – Descriptive writing

  1. I ate the most delicious salty banana in the world at a restaurant every monkey is very jealous so every monkey went to the salty banana restaurant and it got crowded.

  2. My teacher worked hard to get her quiet and crazy puppy Oliver In our classroom. Hes black with light brown hes really cute. We have rules about him We can’t bother him if hes in his bed.

  3. My cat feel’s like ruing round the house like a crase cat she feel’s like she is flash . then she fulls down she feel’s like she full down horde . by isla

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