We do revising to help us fix stuff. We try to make our writing better. Also make new sentences. We can also re -read what we wrote .You can use a coloured pencil to corect our spelling and put our periods in the right place.When you read to someone you can fix mistakes that you did not  notice. Thats why you can use a coloured pencil.We revise by taking turns by reading  our writing together and when I read to Rachel she was a very good listener and I  was a good one too. Me and hailey really like revising beacase we got a chance to read our reading together  and we like revising because it will make a perfect story when you are done your bad copy. Thats why its good to use every other line. So you can re -w rite it .THE END

By: Hailey and Rachel P.