Every morning, during first block, our class participates in Writer’s Workshop. This is a time when we focus on being writers and developing our writing skills. Right now we are working through the writing process. We planned ideas about an artifact from our lives. Then we drafted paragraphs, using those ideas. Today, we looked at how to revise our drafts. Thank-you, Logan, for letting us use your draft to try out our revising skills for the first time this year!
Look at Logan’s draft:
What would you do to revise this piece of writing?
We did three things:
- moved a sentence
- added some words
- took away a sentence
Good writers always ask themselves, “Does this writing sound as good as it could?”